**YOUR** songs

wowirace · Post by **wowirace** » 17 Mar 2005, 23:45

WOW

yeah, i remember that "rap song." didnt think you'd post it but...hey, what do i care?

whatthesht · Post by **whatthesht** » 18 Mar 2005, 00:12

yea, watch the next one ima come out wit

ca$h · Post by **ca$h** » 18 Mar 2005, 00:54

I found Drewboi at a rap-off.

http://media.ebaumsworld.com/index.php?e=honkyrap.wmv

paras779 · Post by **paras779** » 18 Mar 2005, 05:07

here's mine ...i made it
It's funny thou...haha

..lol

-My name is paras779
-Now if you'll excuse me I must use the loo
-Reality is a staircase leading nowhere.
-I knew in my heart it could only be you...

HOWZ IT

paras779 · Post by **paras779** » 18 Mar 2005, 05:10

here's another one ...made it now !

yO YO YO
when it comes to Gordon Lightfoot, I can never get enough
Go Speed Racer, go go GO!
standing on the edge of record, playback cough

whatthesht · Post by **whatthesht** » 18 Mar 2005, 23:00

I'm rollin through the hood
with a drop-top as fast as i could
i ain't talking bout that stupid shiznit
i ain't talking bout taking a hit
just saw this n*gga looking at me, it made me sick
i just wanted 2 take a spit
u can't really mess wit me, man 'cause i got lit

all my n*ggaz iz rich
u c us riding on 26's on that Escalade... sick
people thinking i'm a hick trying 2 get hitched
all i got 2 say iz 3 words, "that's F*ck you b*tch!"

Us n*ggaz want 2 get on the top
y'all see us wit the chains and the rocks
watch your ass 'cause this n*gga just got knocked
i'm just as clever as a fox
yea, looks like another battle at Fort Knox
Y'all just jealous 'cause this song rocks
i c u walking around wit the Air Forces, thinking u the shiznit
y'all just make me sick,
so let's finish this off wit, "suck my doodle!"

shiznit Records Gun-it Records

Lil' 25 cent

wowirace · Post by **wowirace** » 18 Mar 2005, 23:24

hahahaha!!

Lil 25 Cent?

whatthesht · Post by **whatthesht** » 19 Mar 2005, 04:24

JPA(Just Playing Around)

paras779 · Post by **paras779** » 19 Mar 2005, 05:38

whatthesht wrote:I'm rollin through the hood
with a drop-top as fast as i could
i ain't talking bout that stupid shiznit
i ain't talking bout taking a hit
just saw this n*gga looking at me, it made me sick
i just wanted 2 take a spit
u can't really mess wit me, man 'cause i got lit

all my n*ggaz iz rich
u c us riding on 26's on that Escalade... sick
people thinking i'm a hick trying 2 get hitched
all i got 2 say iz 3 words, "that's F*ck you b*tch!"

Us n*ggaz want 2 get on the top
y'all see us wit the chains and the rocks
watch your ass 'cause this n*gga just got knocked
i'm just as clever as a fox
yea, looks like another battle at Fort Knox
Y'all just jealous 'cause this song rocks
i c u walking around wit the Air Forces, thinking u the shiznit
y'all just make me sick,
so let's finish this off wit, "suck my doodle!"

shiznit Records Gun-it Records

Lil' 25 cent

hahahah

that is f*ckin' sick !

I LIKE IT

DrewBoi · Post by **DrewBoi** » 19 Mar 2005, 06:51

whatthesht wrote:shiznit Records Gun-it Recoords Lil' 25 cent

Dude what was "sh***y..... honestly ur flow has no good rythm(dont know how to spell it..lol) u gotta have a rhythm and 'flow" between your change of rhymes.... if that is u writin or flowin. i think u can do better..... my "25" cents....

wowirace · Post by **wowirace** » 19 Mar 2005, 15:14

haha, what about me? do i have the "flow" and "rhythm"?

you gotta move to the flow
just like you did with that ho
keep up with the beat
or you gonna cheat
with those lame-a** lyrics
you aint gonna make it
take it from me
cuz im already at the top
i dont need to be tellin you this
but you my cuz
and we're like family
we need to stay tight
so, take my advice
and, go with the flow

DrewBoi · Post by **DrewBoi** » 19 Mar 2005, 18:33

wowirace wrote:haha, what about me? do i have the "flow" and "rhythm"?

you gotta move to the flow,
you gotta go with the flow

ummm you should bascially have the same word... move with the flow because its kinda poetic to do that and it makes your rhymes look and sound better... its being restated or whatever....

wowirace · Post by **wowirace** » 19 Mar 2005, 19:10

oh...i see.

whatthesht · Post by **whatthesht** » 20 Mar 2005, 04:03

Wowirace, u wanna be a rapper or sumthing?....

DrewBoi · Post by **DrewBoi** » 20 Mar 2005, 04:34

whatthesht u gotta tone down the slang and spamming... ur getting on the moderators' nerves....

i got some other freestyles but i think im gonna wait for a while... when i come back to cali with some more verses and all....

korge · Post by **korge** » 15 Aug 2005, 23:18

My Song. Yeah thats right.:P wrote:In my house, curtains fall.
Hereâ€™s my money, take it all.
Hereâ€™s my life, go ahead.
Make it useful instead.

Iâ€™m coming back to you.
No matter what I come to.
Iâ€™m going to try to survive.
Just show me what to do.

I know its short (its only a chorus) Its for a song im writing(rock song). When I finish my studio, Ill record and post the mp3.

Fishwhiz · Post by **Fishwhiz** » 15 Aug 2005, 23:37

*BOOM SOUND*
*clap,clap,clap,clap*
im gonna say it, and say it now
RAP IS CRAP
oh ya, it is
RAP IS CRAP
R is for retards
A is for retards Atempting
P is for them attemtin poetry
and thats why
RAP IS CRAP
*clap,clap,clap,clap*
*BOOM SOUND*

R34GTR · Post by **R34GTR** » 15 Aug 2005, 23:46

Yo fishwiz you cannot rap
your rhymes and your lyrics sound like crap

If you cant rhyme or rap dont bother postin'
unlike my ryhmes which are hot and roastin'

So this is the end of my little rap and oh by the way rap aint crap

Fishwhiz · Post by **Fishwhiz** » 15 Aug 2005, 23:50

look at my sig r34

korge · Post by **korge** » 15 Aug 2005, 23:51

Fishwhiz wrote:look at my sig r34

Look Here...

Any comments on my short exceprt?

R34GTR · Post by **R34GTR** » 15 Aug 2005, 23:56

Nice comment Korge!

Fishwhiz wrote:look at my sig r34

WOW! Its a McLaren

Jopuma · Post by **Jopuma** » 16 Aug 2005, 00:38

This is a song I made for my band. When it forms anyway.

I ponder the eternal question
of if I'll go home with You.
But I'm not certain and only You
You can save me.

Reach out, and touch my life
give it meaning again.
(repeat)

We all think we know the
answers, but in reality
the only One who holds them in
His caring hands is God.

Reach out, and touch my heart,
give it life that it never had.
(repeat)

I question why You came for me
a sinner like me.
From the beginning I never knew
until now I know Your love.

Reach out, and touch my life,
give it meaning again.
Reach out, and touch my heart,
give it life it never had.

Oh, God in heaven save me.

(chourus x3)

korge · Post by **korge** » 16 Aug 2005, 00:40

Doesnt even ryhme so I cant really follow it.

R34GTR · Post by **R34GTR** » 16 Aug 2005, 00:40

Not bad but im not into all the mushy heart felt shiznit

What kind of band are you forming?

Jopuma · Post by **Jopuma** » 16 Aug 2005, 00:48

korge wrote:Doesnt even ryhme so I cant really follow it.

IT'S NOT SUPPOSED TO!!! It's rock music. Rock music doesn't rhyme. Some does, but most doesn't.

R34GTR wrote:Not bad but im not into all the mushy heart felt shiznit

What kind of band are you forming?

It's a Christian band. Hard rock/emotional/screamo stuff. The band name would be either Urainium, Trademark, or Righteous Blood.

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