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Post by ewans_hotcars »

Im 13 and this is my first attempt @ a virtual car, so thell me what you think!
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Post by 2fast4Ux2 »

kul nice job
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Post by master m »

2fast4Ux2 wrote:kul nice job
:roll: :roll:

Are you blind :?:

sorry ewan, but that's a really awfull chop.

The best thing about it is the bodycolour. The rest is just really bad IMO.
Oh yeah, you have to post your chops in this topic:

http://forum.nfsunlimited.net/viewtopic.php?t=3825
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Post by SliM_880 »

hmm...

I think this is good for a first chop...
Take a look at the tuterals in the... But good job for a first attempt...
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Post by 2fast4Ux2 »

well sorry for being nice but yeah now that i think about its a really bad chop
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Post by Calibra_14 »

Like Master M said :(
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Its is ugly because I have no idea what the hell it is.
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the front vinyls are no aligned properly. thats why it looks weird, if you angle it inward where the hood is, than it wont look like its just window standing infront of a car. :)
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It's a bad chop, even for a first...
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Post by NFSBLUECIVIC »

wtf?
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^ Lol at explaination. :lol:
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Post by Pooty Tang »

what in gods name are you talking about NFSBLUECIVIC :roll:

They are all quite clearly to add massive ammounts of horse power and to improve aerodynamics :shock:

Awesome chop dude, don't let these haters get you down :wink:
Keep it up and one day u might, just might, be able to chop like master m.
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Post by NFSBLUECIVIC »

ha! (Laughs at previous coment) I highly doubt whether the fake front crome, badley placed logo, and wierd guage are going to boost horsepower... :roll:
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Post by Te4o_bg »

Nat bad man
But you shoyld work on those pipes - they should be under the grill, or if you want the to beabove it just work a bit more with the details.
Oh and since this is your first chop I got one more advice - take your time working onthe colour scheme of the car
Here you chose nice colours but they are too bright

Overall - nice (lot better than my first chop)
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umm dude...my lil bro is 13 now but when he was 11 he was making those lil funny cars on paint...now i think he could make u cry using any photo program...i mean...i work wit photshop so everything looks like crap to me except some sigs are nice in here ^__^ but maybe u should say working on it some more and the pipe lines are not that huge!
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this isnt really a big wow...but its a lil better....o.ol...dam jepg firetruck up my tint :( forget it ill repost when i got time i got a final top study for
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What was changed? Looks like you turned the contrast up too much.
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hahah ai konw i had to do it real quick i added lil head like renders and i darkend the car the dam tint was to dark :( so i lost myblue...i took off the front and it seemed to get darken..even tho it wasnt selected...which ticked me off but i dont care tomorrow i can do w/e i add the cooler as he put up..umm ill change lights and add wing and change bumber
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This isnt perfect but if you compare the difference you can see which is better

http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/559/lambohelp4rn.jpg

I think im the first to post some constructive critism
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Perspective is key. :)
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Post by Tunerfreak »

Yes, but the hood/ trunk/ whatever it is, isnt on a staright forward angle, so unless you arnt trying to angle the stripes straight, don't follow the hood line :roll: So on average, the one on the right is better.
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Post by 99k »

When it goes in it drwas slighlty into the distance thus making thy line go follow the in and outer partings of the car. Don't make me get Pete smith here.
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Post by NFSBLUECIVIC »

korge wrote:Perspective is key. :)
Well said Korge

and i forgot to put a red circle around the blue/green headlights, if they are headlights...
and now for "Constructive critizizm."
i thing the colors look kinda dumb, not so bright and "out there" the headlights should be left alone, and the wierd chrome front pipe thingys should go, other than that, its not too bad, o yea and the gauges too.
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