Poetry thing...

Stereo · Post by **Stereo** » 11 Nov 2004, 00:26

I have made a few poems and don't steal my ideas please... I had to think what to write about and how to write it... Here's the first one:

LIFE

Life is just a breath
Waiting to go out
But when it starts it's own small death
Spirits dance about
The life of things is fragile
Nothing but a thin wine glass
The life of things is lovely
But a broken life will pass
Some lives are lonely
Some lives are happy
Some lives are angry
Some lves are sad
Any life will do
But you choose the choice
Choose the life you like
And that life will come to you

LAND

Hills and valleys
Full of sand
Nothing but miles
Of open land
Some land is sandy
Some land is grass
But that land
Will always be here
To cheer on and pass

WINGS

Birds are flying
Up so high
So are angels
Flying by
Wings are beautiful
Like the morning sky
Nothing but a little wing
Flying so high

OCEAN

The ocean
Is a blue sky
Full of colors
Right inside
Oceans are blue
Oceans are green
But the life inside
Is never seen
Life inside the ocean
Is just a dirty path
A path that leads to nowhere
A path that makes the blue

BOOKS

Take a book
Read and look
You are in an adventure
Wherever you go
Take a book
Imagine the scenes
Imagine the feelings
But you can never imagine
How it hooks

THE SKY

The sky
It looks so beautiful
Vibrant colors
Of the wind
Colors of the sunset
Colors of the blue
Colors of the rivers
Colors of the fruit
Nothing is more beautiful than the sky
Count all the colors
See how many you get
But Everyday
The colors are blown by the wind

HANDS

Hands are rough
Hands are smooth
They can be wrinkled
They can be cut
Every little finger
So secure and tight
But hands are really life
A life with touch and feel
Fingerprints cover the tips of fingers
Giving you grip
The hands of people
They never drip

EYES

Eyes are vision
Eyes are great
There are decisions
That you can make
You can see
You can be blind
But your eyes
Will never die
No matter
If you are blind
Or if you can see
The eyes are your eyes
Yours only
True eyes

FEELINGS

There are many kinds of feelings
Happy or mad
Lonely or sad
People have feelings
Feelings that are good
And feelings that hurt
If you have nothing nice to say
Shove your mouth with wood
But the feelings will always be there
Always
And forever
Feelings of hate
Always abate
They never die out
Neither do you

I NEVER steal anyone's lines or sentences. It's all made up by mind. I hope you enjoyed reading...

VPNeverLoser · Post by **VPNeverLoser** » 11 Nov 2004, 02:41

lol
me and my brother had a competition makeing up the best rap, not poems tho. Mine is under construction, so here is his

btw he got some lines of the movies and some from me, cuz i just sing out loud making up random stuff

rap deleted...

you know why VP!
even if it is a JOKE, it is a form of racism wich is against the rules of this community!
don't do it again!
-theStig

boganbusman · Post by **boganbusman** » 11 Nov 2004, 03:07

@ Stereo: Wow, you really have talent. Nice work.

@ VP: You're a good rapper and your rap is quite funny, but as soon as Stig sees it I think he will delete the whole thing.

Racism is not cool man.

Stereo · Post by **Stereo** » 11 Nov 2004, 03:20

Sooo... umm any comments on my stuff? Except for talent because i got that 2 times...

(BTW I added another one called "FEELINGS"

Post by **TheStig** » 11 Nov 2004, 03:22

yeah it is some nice work there Stereo...

you got multiple skills!

(btw tnx bogan)

Stereo · Post by **Stereo** » 11 Nov 2004, 03:29

thanks stig!

EDIT: I can't remove post.

Dr-CiviC · Post by **Dr-CiviC** » 11 Nov 2004, 11:58

verry nice u hav some stuff going on dere

Hybrid 87 · Post by **Hybrid 87** » 12 Nov 2004, 13:35

Well here is something that I wrote:

To a Girl

Things can`t be the same,
And there`s no one to blame,
Exept of my heart and soul,
I feel like I`m in a deep hole,
When I`m not with you,
And there`s nothing I can do,
`Cause I`m waitin` and waitin`,
Waitin` and waitin`,
For your love,
Which I want to have,
I wish you could spend your life with me,
You`re the only one for me,
Your my queen,
Which no one has ever seen,
So let me be king of your heart,
And the life won`t be so hard,
I don`t care what others see,
It`s just `bout you and me,
Your my everything in my life,
I want you to be my wife,
Nobody else but you,
No matter what you do,
Let me take you into my arm,
I`ll do you no harm,
When I see you,
There`s nothing I rather do,
Than to be with you,
You lift me up, up high,
To the magic sky,
Give me your hand and I`ll show you the world,
Don`t say a word,
Even if I don`t have a cent,
It will be like dream, everywhere we went,
Paris, take your morning shower,
Let`s kiss on the Eifel Tower,
Let`s go to the casino,
In Monte Carlo,
Then let`s drive to San Marino,
In my cabrio,
Our hearts will beat synchorne,
In front of Peters Dome,
How`s about Dubay,
You`ll say "Oh my",
You`ll be my arabian princess,
Then to Los Angeles,
I`ll make you a movie star,
Wanna be Bonnie and Clyde? So we are,
We go from Canada to Panama,
I`ll show you the greatest panorama,
Let`s go to NYC,
That will be a dream, you will see,
Even if theres no World Trade,
I`ll make a dream for you on the Empire State,
There is no word,
In the world,
That could describe you,
As much as a look from you,
Your eyes, your smile,
Damm, you`re beutiful.

I Remember The Time

Clock always tickin`,
That's not worth askin`,
I did you wrong I must confess ,
And live in loneliness,
When I mention your name,
The pain, I can`t stand the shame,
It's only me that I can blame,
I took the risk, didn`t make any conclusion,
And went the wrong direction,
You win or loose relationships,
Just like playin` battleships,
That`s the way how it goes,
It hurts from your head to your toes,
You can't see what I see,
Tell me,
Why are you in anger,
Are you in danger,
Fighting everyday,
Punches are the words we say,
Time is money and time will tell,
Sunshine in heaven or grill in hell,
But I remember,
I remember the time, the time that we had,
I remember the things, that use to make you mad
And I wish, I could turn back the time,
I remember the time.

The End of the Road

One second in my life is passin` me by,
One second in my life like a bird in the sky,
Can someone tell will I live or will I die,
And if I have to go, I wanna go with a smile,
Life is too short to live in anger,
Life is too short to live in danger,
That makes me think of my life,
It`s a pain like I`m cut by a knife,
I`m always judged by the cover,
Why I have to suffer?
Let it rain,
Let it rain,
Make my pain go away,
So I can face the judgement day,
I remember my dreams,
I remember my hopes,
I remember my needs,
In my dreams I`m down on my knees,
In my dreams I`m begging you please,
Let my soul rest in peace,
I have pockets full of memories,
Much love to my famalies,
I have pockets full of memories,
Much hate to my enemies,
That`s the way life is,
That`s the way life goes,
I know that I`ve made mistakes,
But I`ll do all that I can
Just to help my fellow man,
So I`ll be a better man today.

Stereo · Post by **Stereo** » 12 Nov 2004, 14:00

Very nice! It sounds like they're all about a girl except for last one...

boganbusman · Post by **boganbusman** » 12 Nov 2004, 14:05

Both of you guys should get these published, they are damn good.

Better then anything I could do anyway.

^Sparco^ · Post by **^Sparco^** » 12 Nov 2004, 16:17

yeah you are good.

I am toooo lazy even to try it... Anyway it would be in Spanish

Stereo · Post by **Stereo** » 12 Nov 2004, 21:58

@boganbusman: Thanx!

@Sparco: lol... Spanish...

ViperJay · Post by **ViperJay** » 12 Nov 2004, 23:23

yo men, really good work for both of you
sometimes I try with some rap, but I don't know english perfectly, so I've some problem

btw, I keep tryin', and hope you 2 do the same, you're both good guys

Stereo · Post by **Stereo** » 13 Nov 2004, 02:55

I tried to make a song... a rock song... (Linkin park style) here it is:

Watching you go murder me
Makes my head go wild and spin
You can never lie to me
I have always put trust in you *you, you, you, you*

I have fallen down the haunted dream
Doing nothing but murdering the scene
I have fallen down to get so free
But what I got was hell in my dreams

My life is just a trick
Created by you
Sadness and loneliness in my head
But in my life I have really been dead
Now my dreams are back still ahead
Your face reminds me of death
Every second of life
I want to stop
The misery of my head
In this haunted dream.... *in this haunted dream...*

I have fallen down the haunted dream
Doing nothing but murdering the scene
I have fallen down to get so free
But all I got was hell in my dreams

But I know
That you have not been alone
But I know
That there's someone else like you with a life like mine

I have fallen down the haunted dream
Doing nothing but murdering the scene
I have fallen down to get so free
But all I got was hell in my dreams
I have fallen down the haunted dream
Doing nothing but murdering the scene
I have fallen down to get so free
But all I got was hell in my dreams

My first written song and i like it.. lol I realy do...

boganbusman · Post by **boganbusman** » 13 Nov 2004, 03:23

Man you should start recording this stuff. Hook up a mic to your computer and find someone who can sing.

Then use a program like Garageband to mix in some music.

Stereo · Post by **Stereo** » 13 Nov 2004, 03:41

The only problem is that I have to use my dad's computer to do that because i have no mic... His computer contains everyting... Piano Keyboard, multimedia controller, 3 mics, synthesizer thingy... (Something to change instruments on a keyboard. We have 128 types for each style... (Strings, Drums, Piano..) So It's possible but I am also russian so It will be weird for my parents hearing me scream in english downstairs...

O yea I might make a band. My friend likes to sing. I like drums...

But I am the main guy because i thought up the idea so I will sing too and do drums and other instruments. he will just sing because he is kind of bad at makin music...

boganbusman · Post by **boganbusman** » 13 Nov 2004, 03:54

Cool.
I'll look forward to your first track.

Good luck

Stereo · Post by **Stereo** » 13 Nov 2004, 03:59

Yea It might only be out maybe next week or the week later... You see my mom stays at home and my dad goes to work... He goes to work the computer is free but then my mom is still watchin

So it will take time....

boganbusman · Post by **boganbusman** » 13 Nov 2004, 04:03

???Are you saying that you're not allowed to use your dad's computer???

hahaha that's funny. Why don't you just ask him?

Stereo · Post by **Stereo** » 13 Nov 2004, 04:04

I can use my dad's computer but my mom will be hearing me yell and sing.... And I'm russian... (I have no problems with english... people talk to me and thihnk I an american because I have no accent...)

boganbusman · Post by **boganbusman** » 13 Nov 2004, 04:39

So? Do you feel embarrased singing in front of your mum? lol

Stereo · Post by **Stereo** » 13 Nov 2004, 05:15

Yes, singing In english and she's russian...

Hybrid 87 · Post by **Hybrid 87** » 14 Nov 2004, 16:58

Wrote something more. This one has no title.

Didn't you recognize me yesterday?
Now I can't let her get away.
Stay baby, stay - until the break of day.
I'll show you love, I'll bring you joy - but anyway,
I saw you once or twice on my way home back from school.
Just looking faster was it - ha - but you was acting cool.
I got to go, no way to stay and that's alright.
I passed your way and now the day or night.
You came back to me Wednesday night, when I dreamt of you,
'cuz I dreamt of love, screaming passion and the things we do.
You can feel my heart
You can be my love
I will be there
Whenever you just walk on by.

PSZeTa · Post by **PSZeTa** » 14 Nov 2004, 17:12

My rap rocks like hell and you buy some Dell.

Sorry, I just made up something.>=)

Hybrid 87 · Post by **Hybrid 87** » 14 Nov 2004, 18:18

@PSZeTa
That`s a cool rap line

And again something new from me:

I`ll do everything for you, just you,
I'm gonna paint the grey sky blue,
When it starts to rain I'm gonna make it shine,
I'll do what I gotta do just to make you mine,
Everytime you go away, I miss you, I want you back,
Your love hits me like a heart attack,
You are the only one I want here by my side,
I can`t hide it evenn if I tried,
Please let me know, please tell me today,
That you'll be here for always and for ever and a day,
I just want you to stay,
Because you have taken my heart away,
And when the rain begins to fall,
You are my rainbow in the sky,
And I will catch you if you fall,
You never have to ask me why,
You know that we could have it all,
I'll be the sunshine in your life,
You are the one in my life.